Image by Frank Gruber via FlickrFrom: Jared Goralnick (AwayFind) Date: Wed, Jul 6, 2011 at 1:15 PM Subject: You and me... To: The Marketing Tactician Hi Scott, I may not know you personally. You don't know me from any other tech geek with a web service or techie startup. And we'll probably never get the chance to meet. But let me tell you a quick story, and ask you a quick favor… I'm not just someone at a tech company. My name is Jared. I have several passions in life including swing dance and photography. But my real passion, and what I've devoted my entire career to, is helping people to use technology as a vehicle rather than an obstacle to getting stuff done. For the past 3 years, I've been consumed by AwayFind and helping people to escape their inbox— not just to help them become more efficient at their jobs or run their business better, but to allow them to spend more time with their family or whatever it is that makes their lives more whole. So that's my passion and the reason I created AwayFind. I think that we offer a pretty good service. But I know that it can be better. And I know you can help me figure out how. If you could spend two minutes and fill out a quick survey as a favor to me, it'd really help me to understand how we can do a better job…for you. <<Thanks in advance for taking our 2 minute survey.>> Here's to time well spent, Jared AwayFind.comThings I really like about this marketing effort are:
- The From Address includes a person's name and their company so it's easily identifiable and more personable
- The subject line is short (only 13 characters!) and seems directed to me... I'm the "You" in the "You and me..."
- The body copy is easily scanned and the bold text tells me what the message is about
- Jared tells an authentic story that helps me understand why he needs my help
- The content is unexpected. Most emails won't walk me through an internal dialogue like this email has done. And in this way, it doesn't come across as a marketing email to me. Jared is just asking for my opinion like a friend would ask me.
- The email has one call to action... Fill out a quick survey.
- Its messaging is on point. AwayFind is all about saving time and the closing really hits the mark by tying in the survey with "time well spent"